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Does the 'bot' keep complaining your blog post has too many ‘passive sentences’?

Here’s what that smarty pants is talking about…


Sentences can be ACTIVE or PASSIVE. 


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In an ACTIVE SENTENCE, the subject of the sentence performs an action. 

Example: James Architects has designed over a hundred zero-carbon homes. 


In a PASSIVE SENTENCE, something is done TO the subject of the sentence. 

Example: Over a hundred zero-carbon homes have been designed by James Architects. 

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🤷‍♂️ So why should you use mostly active sentences when you write content for your business?


It shows confidence and makes you sound in control


It produces shorter more direct sentences


It’s easier and clearer for your reader to understand


It attributes your good work directly to you




🔎 And how can you spot those slippery passive sentences?...

…Look out for a ‘by’ phrase at the end of your sentence. 


Rewrite it so the subject in the ‘by’ phrase comes at the start. 

Example:  (Passive) The award-winning project was led by our team.

(Active) Our team led the award-winning project.



Good luck taking on the bot! And if you ever need keyboard back-up, get in touch!




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